这封求职信中求职者首先搬出了自己的硕士导师，因为他是个知名人士，并且在信里附上他的推荐信。这些都是有效的求职办法。另他还强调自己会2种外语且发表过论文，这种“自我标榜”在求职信里是很重要的。
Director of Consulting Center
Shanghai Foreign Service Co., Ltd
406 Maoming Mansion, 580 Maoming Rd(S)
Luwan District, Shanghai 20021
Dear Mr. Director,
I am currently working on Master Degree in International Commercial law at Fu Dan University. My supervisor Mr. Liu Mingyu, a well-know professor of law, tells me that SFSC specializes in recommending qualified personnel to muti-national companies and suggests that I contact you for recommendation.
During the two years of studies at Fu Dan University, I have not only acquired a lot of knowledge of international commercial law, but learned two foreign languages as well －English and Japanese. Moreover, I have published two papers in the university journal on problems that may arise after Chinas entry to WTO. And they have been favorably accepted.
I am enclosing a resume, copies of my published papers, and Professor Lius letter of recommendation.
I sincerely hope you wil introduce me to a famous multi-national company, to which I will dedicate myself.
Truly yours,
Fu Jialin